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Fanart: jpstardust

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Fanart for the senpai:iconjpstardust: :3
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Please do NOT recolor, trade or do anything else to this
Stardust belong to jpstardust 
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:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

It's quite a nice and simple style :3
The big eyes make the character seem very cute.
The strand-like style of the hair makes it seem that you were trying to achieve
a more realistic finish? It looks fine however in contrast to the chibi/anime style it doesn't quite match ~v~
The lumps of tail mane past the hair band should be reduced a bit. They pop
out too much which seems slightly awkward ;v;'''
The big ears are a nice touch c: added cuteness! Instead of shading yellow with yellow, I would suggest mixing in some brown and orange. Yellow is a bright colour and can't really be used for shading especially when drawing with pencil crayons.
Hope this was helpful! good luck!